Saturday, 10 December 2005 - 7:49 PM

Priyo Arya-da,
Tomar kotha thik-i. Nazim Hikmat-er kobita porle protibad-er ekta darun
dongho paowa jay. kintu seta chhariyeo amar onar kobitay jeta sob theke
bhalo lage, ta holo osadharon somoy chetona. onekdin age ekta kobita
porechhilam, ekhon thik mone nei, kintu mul byapar-ta mone achhe. seta
boli. kobi jail-e asar por ekta pencil-e likhte shuru koren. ebong dos din
bade sei pencil phuriye jay. sei ghotonake kendro kore uni likhchhen
'amake jodi jigges karo, ami bolbo / amar jiboner matro dos-ta din /
pencil-ke jigges karo / o bolbe amar gota jibon.' dyakho, ei je contrast,
amader sobar jibon relative, ei byaparta eto sohoj bhabe onar kolom-e uthe
ase je porhe bhison anondo pai. ebong onar besh kichhuta probhab dekhechhi
subhas mukhopadhyay-er kobitay. bhabo, 'phul phutuk na phutuk / aj
bosonto', eo ki amader jiboner relative flow dekhay na? tobe hya, onar
kobitar sob theke boro virtue holo, sadharon kathay osadharon ekta
satire-er chabuk mara, jeta kintu Hikmat-er kobitay nei, karon seta
onektai bidroher barudi gondhe thasa. ekta line dyakho subhas
mukhopadhyay-er, 'ami dekhe esechhi nodir ghar dhore / aday kora hochchhe
bidyut. / bhalo katha.' ei je pashapashi 'aday kora' ar 'bhalo katha' uni
bosiye dilen, kobita-ta serious theke satire-e turn nilo, ebong sorasori.
ei khane subhas mukhopadhyay ar nazim hikmat-er tophat. ontoto amar tai
mone hoy.
Abhijit.

Saturday, 10 December 2005 - 8:02 PM

kabitaa niye eman gabhIr bhaabanaachintaa thekei aamaader laabh hay. ebang aadhunik praJuktir saahaajyaarthe Jakhan ei binimay guli deergha bhUgol bhed kareo hate paare, takhan aananda dbiguN hay.

Abhi, tor kathaagulo khub daamI o khaa`nTi.
subhaashh mukhopadhyay-er pa`mktiTaar janya dhanyabaad.

Nazim er jel theke lekhaa Je kabitaaTaar kathaa tulechhis, seTaa aamaader sakalaer ati-priya kabitaa. pratham kayeka laain tule dilaam aabaar.

Subhaas Mukhopadhyay-er satire satyi i chama`tkaar. shleshh praay baa`nshir mata. Jahar Sen Majumdar er ekaTaa lekhaa parhalaam . "baabaader dhik". subhaas-ke niye. sekhaane kabir ekaTi laainake jaharadaa aparUpabhaabe parhalen - subhaas likhechhilen nijer naatanider niye -

ra`Mer baaksa khule basechhe
aamaar dui naatani
taaraa ki aa`nke naa dekhe
aami narhachhi naa

jaharadaa balachhen Je natun Jugake kibhaabe natun prajanma rachanaa karate chalechhe taar sambandhe aajo teebra koutuhal raakhen Je kabi, tini-i barha kabi. naatanider aa`nkaa dekhate taai se udagreeb.

opare lekhaaTaar link dilaam.

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